On the fragrant petals the waiting eyes
The snowballs making whitest the dawn
Doves chirping waking up with the sunrise
On the morning door, you knocking the heart
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The theme, language and metaphors are lucid and enchanting which captivate and fascinate our minds. The metaphor 'cat's eye observing' is excellent.
The theme, metaphors, and thoghts of the poem enchant me a lot. I appreciate you.
beautiful imagery you are created here. everyday is the day of love for lover and beloved
Fabulous poetic expressions, full of beautiful metaphors.........10
Marvellous poem Mahtab. Fragrant petals, snowballs, chirping birds, the morning door
On the morning door, you knocking the heart, beautiful expression
The theme, metaphors, and thoghts of the poem enchant me a lot. I appreciate you