Everybody Wants A Piece Of You Comments

Just give a little bit.... a little piece by piece until hello.... they've taken the whole lot. One can feel very diminished...everyone wanting a piece of your time, money and ultimately the whole sum of your life. Well penned Brian.

(If you don't insist it is a poem) Very nicely written Brian. It hits home because we all have the same feeling of being targeted. The thing flows. Where are those limericks? You will have a built-in audience, me.

Perfect poem, my sentiments exactly, and the way you put it together - this is a classic! I nearly lose my mind when that electronic advertising money-monger's voice take over my computer while I'm working- I can't stand this constant begging and whining about all problems everywhere WHILE all we can do is take care of our own family and the beggars on our own corner! This is JUST perfectly compiled, thank you for the poem.

A very thoughtful poem, indeed. Nicely written on today's scenario....Liked it, Sir.