Why everybody stare at me?
As if I have fallen from tree
A ripe fruit for everybody to grab
Make desparate run with knife to stab
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More Post wow Astrid Broco2 hours ago very good poem.I enjoyed reading it. good job Comment +1 Left to wonder your meaning Crystal Hedspeth2 hours ago So write about your poem. Comment +1 Great Heather Lord2 hours ago Very deep and very true. Comment +1 good Louis 72 hours ago I like this piece.
For any girl it may be difficult way Thorns may be found but will have to be pushed away It is life time remembrance and has to be weighed The life must be moved further and not stayed
Re: Everybody stares (Score: 1) by rose.storrs This poem has potential, but the English language has been misused a lot. Im unsure if its on purpose or not, but it messes up the flow for me. Best wishes! Rose Muhammad Rafique Farooqi very interesting poem