Sunday, August 26, 2018

Everybody Sleeps Comments

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Somewhere in the world, people are asleep
While we go on and conduct our lives

An orchestra of snores and dreams
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Phil Soar
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Paul Brookes 26 August 2018

I love the idea convey here We as you rightly say never give others a thought because they are continents away sleeping or we are sleeping ourselves. A lot more said in between the lines. Enjoyed this well constructed poem Gives the reader food for thought

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