Everybody's Talking To Someone Apart From Me Comments

This is a great write Vincent, it flows nicely and is constructed so well, with variety in the lines. Thanks for posting it I enjoyed it very much. Love Ernestine XXX

It's not that I know just how lonely you sometimes feel, speaker: you know just how how lonely I sometimes feel. Your imagery is rich and varied - from creatures of nature to man-made, mechanical phenomena. And the metaphor at the end is just so moving. Love it.

dont worry, . poets are all like that. thats why they turn to poetry.

Dear Vincent. You can talk with me if you like. I know the feeling in your poem all too well. Tai no mates, when the sky falls down. 10 cus you express my feelings so well.