Saturday, May 6, 2006

Everybody Dance (The Dance Of The Dead) Comments

Rating: 4.9

As the sun sinks upon the horizon,
As the dark night creeps in,
The dead dance.
On the streets they roam,
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Charlie F. Kane
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Sylva Portoian 01 December 2011

I liked you poem But not the dead... Think about life Before the grave Let us read more The happiness in you That I hope Will seed and pave...

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Marina Gasbey 20 July 2010

Impressive Biography, Great poetry, and songs! ..... Marina Gabey....

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Kailynd McGregor 14 December 2006

magnificent job, i love it, i really like the way you describe the rhthym. keep it up, your stuff is great! ~Kailynd

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Meghan - 26 July 2006

Is this about the grateful dead at all? Anyway though, great write. Meghan

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AH! WELL DONE, YOUNG MAN..THE BITTERSWEET TASTE OF THE MOROSE OF DARKSIDE PROSE...POE IS A STELLAR CHOICE OF PREFERRED READ, AS WELL AS A QUALIFIED INFLUENCE IN CON- JUNCTION W/ YOUR OWN CRAFTED STYLE...WILL BE READING UP ON MORE OF YOUR WORK, YOUNGBLOOD...MEANWHILE, A(10) FOR THE' DANCE '...KEEP UP THE MERITOUS WORK, CHARLIE.

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Charlie F. Kane

Charlie F. Kane

Solihull, Birmingham
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