Friday, October 23, 2009

Every Woman Everywhere Comments

Rating: 5.0

If only could every woman at the well
Could have her pitcher filled; her needs fulfilled
The right to follow her own dream
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Shanta Majumder 25 October 2009

It is your own idea where your freedom lies. So true....10 for this line only....liked your thought....

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Marilyn Lott 24 October 2009

Very nicely put. Women have so many fears and worries especially if we have children. A lot on our plate, for sure! '10! ' A nice tribute. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Daniel Kempson 23 October 2009

This is magnificient Rani one of your best writes and you have had so many 10 Daniel

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Ranjit Ravindran 23 October 2009

Realistically portrayed...good work Ma'am. Liked these lines the most. ......................................................................... Fears of work in wild cities, Fears, fears, tears. Where do you go when you're alone? .......................................................................... Freedom from hunger, freedom from strife Does the city then have any pity? One, hunger because crops have failed The other, jobless and hunger Rents have to be paid... ........................................................................... Wishing all women a safer & happier lives, Ranjit.

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Fay Slimm 23 October 2009

A fine and well deserved tribute Rani - - every woman who reads this will identify with it's truth...... a sincere thank you - - Fay

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