Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Every Way We Turn Comments

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every way we turn
we want to do our thing

we balk at yielding
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robyn selters
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nomad omnia 04 March 2010

A lesson learned...so true. Good one, Robyn.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 24 February 2010

Just perfect. The beginning lines and the end lines just complete the poem into a great message.10+

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 24 February 2010

Just perfect. I like the simplicity and the beginning lines ushering the conclusion at the end. Very effective and well written poem.10+++++

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