Wednesday, March 18, 2015

Every War Fought.......... Comments

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Mahtab Bangalee 14 October 2019

War grave digger Victory Flag flyer simultaneously! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 August 2018

A wonderful little poem (Haiku) ...insightful! Loved reading it.......................10

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Jette Blackstone 18 November 2017

That's the truth distilled into a few small lines.

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Savita Tyagi 09 August 2017

Very profound. All about war is said in so few words. Thanks for letting me know.

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Tom Allport 15 June 2017

a truthful poem of war that never changes.....people die people cry o why o why? ...........well writen

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Thank you Tom, for your comment.

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Uma Ram 14 March 2016

Very true sir...wars not only in fields but inside everyone...

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Navod Dilhara 29 February 2016

You have that peculiar rhythm always with you. Great poem.

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Kewayne Wadley 24 December 2015

Wisely crafted! Truly one whom speaks volumes. KW

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 24 December 2015

Thank you KW.

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Bri Edwards 30 April 2015

winning AND losing.............this IS something to think about. AND i just now noticed the use of loosing rather than losing. i've seen this error before, and i think i've made it myself at times! ! ! i know; it's hard to believe i would make an error! ! ! bri :) :) :)

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Thanks very much Bri for showing the typos.

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Bri Edwards 30 April 2015

i wish people who have 'wars within' (themselves) would just kill THEMSELVES. they should save others the trouble. .....................BUT............WAIT! What about us good guys aka the U.S. and India [oops! Sri Lanka i meant] et al? ? i'm, of course, only thinking about the other side aka the bad ones aka the ones with different views of their world! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - - - - - - - - - - - actually, since PH says you don't allow messages to be sent to you, i am being tricky and leaving two (2) messages here, under my poem comment! 1- which person is you in ‘your’ PH photo? the young guy or the old guy? ha ha 2. and here is my response to the poem comment you recently left me: your comment: Date & Time: 4/26/2015 11: 52: 00 PM Poem: 42092923 - Mrs. Toad Meets Mr. Toad …. [toad Creation; Courtship; Humor; Short Enough] Member: Jayatissa K. Liyanage Comment: Hi Bri, This is interesting. Its a mix of both science and poetry in a gentle way. I like it. Thanks for sharing. Jayatissa, i'm not always gentle in my poems. life just isn't that way. but, yes, Mr. and Mrs. Toad did not do combat, but just a little talking and spreading of their separate elements. I'm glad you enjoyed it. bri :)

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Uma Ram 20 April 2015

Beautiful and crisp sir. thanks for sharing sir.

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Roseann Shawiak 10 April 2015

Struggles within and without people are always continuing no matter what. Short, direct and to the point! Good message! Thank you. RoseAnn

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Mj Lemon 30 March 2015

The war within...and the war without...struggle occupies every frame of being....A great poem...A 10.

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Thank you MJ. Cheers!

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Jahooru Islam 26 March 2015

every war fought is nice picture of wars & results good job....it gets 10 from me! !

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Thank you JI. Cheers!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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