Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Every Time I Look At You... Comments

Rating: 5.0

everytime i look at you, you fake a smile...
everytime i look at you, our distance grows a mile...

i still dont know what happened, i guess it was my fault...
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Ankit Mathur
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 June 2011

Well done Ankit! Just keep on writing. I loved the poem because of its rhythmic flow and fine imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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