Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Every Time I Close My Eyes Comments

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</>Every time I close my eyes I see her
A past lover a future wife
Swimming in my blood like heroin
Dancing through my brain like cocain
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Damian Robinson
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Romeo Della Valle 04 November 2011

Wow! Damian! This is really a powerful write that has become your stepping stone that will lead you into the Poetry World some time soon to come! I know this fact for sure as long as you keep on writing and going without the two controlled substances mentioned above in your well penned and poignant write! 10+++God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! In Poetry Yours, Romeo from New York City! ...

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thisis a very well written poem i enjoyued it., may i ask who your love is?

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Damian Robinson

Damian Robinson

Detroit, MI
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