Sunday, January 6, 2008

Every Smile Comments

Rating: 4.8

Watching people come and go,
Acting in their private show,
Touching me while passing by,
Every smile a perfect lie.
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Mary Wismer
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Chinedu Dike 17 January 2017

An unveiling of the human mask, nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Mary.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 17 January 2017

Every smile a perfect lie. A counterfeit expression of life. Good poem. Congrats! Sylva-Onyema Uba

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 January 2017

Yeah, the world is full of fakes. Very nice and congrats on being poet of the day.

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 January 2017

Hi, Congrats on being selected as the Poet of the Day. Watching people come and go, Acting in their private show, Touching me while passing by, Every smile a perfect lie. Wonderful poem! Keep it up..

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 17 January 2017

A beautiful poem Mary.Congratulations for being member of the day Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Christina Simmons 17 January 2017

I had to read this poem several times before I could figure out what the writer (you) meant? See a smile I CAN NEVER GUESS WHAT IS HIDDEN behind the mask? ? ? ? Good just got me visualizing different situation.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 January 2017

Next door! Thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 January 2017

A beautifully envisioned profound write. Congrats on it's selection as poem of the Day.

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Tom Allport 17 January 2017

good insightful poem of people's coming's and going's.

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M Asim Nehal 17 January 2017

Congrats for the honours. Every smile truly deserves it,

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 January 2017

Well-written poem, Mary...... Thanks and congrats on being chosen for the day+++++++++++++++++.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 07 January 2008

'Every smile a perfect lie' not all of them by the way it is life, thanks for sharing impressive poem

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