Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Every Rose Has A Thorn Comments

Rating: 4.9

The beauty of a Rose, its pure innocence,
The glee it brings when it’s greatness is gifted.
The heart of the beholder filled with wonder,
The senses are taken and one by one are lifted.
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Daniel P Martin
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 05 September 2011

THIS IS VERY TRUE AND IF A ROSE MEANS BEAUTY THERE SHOULD BE A THORN TO GUARD IT FROM BEING RUINED TO HAVE ITS BALANCE THIS IS A SYMBOLIC WRITE VERY NICE

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Tsira Gogeshvili 02 September 2011

Daniel, It is good poem... But is not felt east scent... it's not secretly that Every rose thorned .....Every rose has potential to cause great pain. and anyone who falls in her love, should be ready to accept pains also from her... Best wishes, Tsira.

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Diana Rose Tolentino 31 August 2011

Thorns in the roses, yes it can cause pain..but only to those who carelessly tried to pick the flower. To the bearer of the thorns it might be a protection, to shield a scared being. Just like a human's heart, doesn't it? Sometimes the persons who have the capacity to love more are the most afraid, so they protect themselves. So..people or flowers, we should always be gentle to avoid hurting them and of course, avoid hurting ourselves. Its Life. The message of the poem is very sentimental. I admire you for having the imagination and the talent to put it into beautifully written piece of art. Continue writing. Thank you for sharing.10

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Unwritten Soul 02 August 2011

The roses spell curse this poem, why? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? i smell it scent sweetly eye sight, but somehow i can feel the hurt bruises like a thorn embedded in my fingers...i dont care coz the beauty and smell exist as natural...that was your poem! Unwritten Soul

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C.R. Clark 18 July 2011

Ah yes, to really enjoy the Rose one must endure the thorn. As in life most things that are worthwhile carry a certain amount of risk. To truly experience the beauty we must take the chance of being dissappointed. But, what would life be like without the beauty? Well said, my friend....10. Thanks Richard

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Shadow Girl 18 July 2011

Beautiful poem with a great sentiment and theme to it. Really enjoyed reading it....very well written. SG

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 13 July 2011

I like the poem. It's universal truth that everybody must know that even the most beautiful flower does have thorn. This poem has a nice message, and the writing style is lovely. Nice poem :)

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