Thursday, May 5, 2016

Every Person Is A Piece Of Gold. Comments

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Every person is a piece of gold.

You are
A gold ring,
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Dr. Antony Theodore
COMMENTS
Roseann Shawiak 10 May 2016

Love your descriptions of gold things, and how you transform your poem into a beautiful diatribe of what really matters in this life. All else is just temporary and/or materialistic, not having or adding any value to our souls. Wonderful testimony to our spirits, Tony, they are what make us to be a piece of gold. Truly great poem! 10++++ RoseAnn

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Susan Williams 08 May 2016

I enjoy the structure of your poems- the two centered lines are like a traffic signal slowing the reader, preparing him for a change of course. I enjoy the context of your poetic message- you give your readers pause to think, to ponder. And I enjoy the words and images you use to get our minds focused not on the impermanent things but the eternal truths behind them...... and using a watch- great choice.+++++

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True, reality perfect truth, we r unique but different, thanks poet

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