Every pain ends
It's not the impasse
The vivacity we carry
Eclipses the suffering
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Yes, I absolutely agree with you. A highly expressive write...5 stars
Vivacity of life! ! ! Overcoming the odds; Even with the pains. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Life of a bubble... Nothing is forever Not even sufferings...Well said.
Very poignant observation on the facts of life. True, it is not the feeling of a dead end that makes us oblivious of the harshest of pains. It is just that, our innate liveliness overshadows the pain. The pain remains. So does the cause of the pain. But our effervescence crowds it out. Remember It is simply a bend 😇
Insightful and philosophical-....1. दर्द का हद से गुज़ारना है दवा हो जाना /....2. धूप चढ़ती है दीवारों पे ढलने के लिए also carry a somewhat similar message. All sufferings should come to an end- sooner or later. Thanks for a poem with an element of hope.
Endurance is the greatest asset of women folk. Good piece. Carries a great notion. Full rating
'Remember It's simply a bend' - thanks for this very inspiring assurance. Loved your short poem with wide meanings.
Very nice consolation for all of us.Beautifully worded Mam.