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u need to learn to stand ur ground.... but I get ur drift cuz I thought just like u...evrywhere everytime. but try not using guess a lot it makes u sound iffy. like u don't know what u think unless that's what's it's s'pose to be.?

A good poem. Everyone needs someone to open up one's heart, specially when your own people donot recognize and understand you in your teens, you clamour to reveal your real self to your paramour. Your natural style, simple wods and flow are impressive.

I like the transition of emotions, I can really relate since I have been through most of the worst love positions ever. So good write...

another beautiful one sometimes waiting is the best thing to do though i understand the whole people not wanting you to see him kind of thing very teenage love story genre which is just my style lol good write

wow i love your pome it is amazinge i would love to read other pomes you wirte