Every Mustard Grain Comments

Superb poem, interesting writing indeed.10

As a chess player, this is my favorite part: I was taken to the desert, to the howling wilderness To face temptation's evil joy and play a game of chess And many pawns they died that day to save the Kingdom's reign And many seeds of tears were sown in desert sand like rain Well done, and congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day!

Lovely poem with lilting sweetness of rhyme. The role of a mustard grain and its derivation from mythology is just amazing. Thanks, Goran. Please keep up the good work. Then a vision bright and clear; I can see His Kingdom reign In every newborn child and in every mustard grain

Poem full of hope and promise.Liked it.

a good piece of words. Words that gives hope

love, love, love this. Thank you.

A beautifully penned inspirational poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

this life is but an endless cycle, of birth and death...An atom contains the whole and the whole is made of millions of atoms...

My hope is for the children, playing on the shore... How true for all of us.

Planted with the muse of love. Thanks for sharing.

A potent penning My friend. Belief in something beyond man is essential

loved the way this was written. Strong thread ran through the whole poem, solid yet moving write. Excellent!

excellent complex metaphor From the silent garden of despair, my voice is crying out excellent abstract poem belonging to symbolism 10/10

That first stanza is powerfully written. Liked the mustard grain theme. Adeline

Echoes of Christ in the garden.10+++

*********************************************************************** In the moment of oblivion I turn to the wind and rain With a last and final call, for Him to ease my pain *********************************************************************** Tears just rolled down on my cheeks reading this. I can relate these lines, because this is what i always do every time, and call on HIM to ease the pain. Until now, i still grieve the deaths of my parents and my elder sister, they died one year after another.. I love the way you use your words, it is wonderful and your message is powerful. Thank you so much for sharing.Love it. Shalom.. God bless you, Meggie

A lovely piece of work Goran, beautifully worded. Best wishes, Andrew

WOW! Goran, this is beautiful! Very powerful words, and a deep introspective look at life in all it's dimensions. Your writing reminds me of some of mine. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. Best, Linda :)