Saturday, November 11, 2017

Every Moon Sets -11: The Cold Promise Comments

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Your cold kisses
on my lips of desire
red with expectations
that are bathed
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 15 November 2017

the moon of agony shines in the sky of pains above the zenith of nights of separation. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks. 10+++

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Alina Kaikeyi 15 November 2017

Your cold kisses on my lips of desire red with expectations that are bathed in the lake of death wishes remain untraced Lovely sharing. Thanks. 10++++

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Sonali Parida 14 November 2017

the moon of agony shines in the sky of pains above the zenith of nights of separation. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 November 2017

Thanks Sonali for the wise and kind remarks on the poem

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Binayakumar Mohanty 11 November 2017

The bulltrfly of sin promises once more.......Nicely crafted.I enjoyed.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 November 2017

Thank you Sir for these remarks with so inspiring words.

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Rini Shibu 11 November 2017

Lovely write Subhas about every moon sets..10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 November 2017

Thank you Rini for these inspiring words.

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