Saturday, November 11, 2017

Every Moon Sets -09: The Evil Game Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon sets
behind the roof-top
in the far western sky
beneath the dark veils
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

with clouds of heartless- girl friends of past lives playing evil games in the violent sky before the dawn of the only golden morning yet to be conceived. A beautiful poem shared. 10+++ for it.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 11 November 2017

Our lives after lives od unborn urrge All your shadows Play hide and seek ......................... Only golden morning Yet to be conceived. We have to wait sir.we are that orphan dot amongst mutitude of dreams left un attended.we live with mus of our itching.Such realisation is very rare sir.I am deeply submerged into the theme.Thanks for sharing

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 November 2017

Thank you sir for being with me on the same line queueing after almost the same dream and tortured almost the same way.

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