Every Moon Sets -08: The Mourn Of The Skylark Comments

Carried through the tides Of dark winter breeze To the pyre of mourning The death of my nascent dream Before its first cry. A beautiful poem shared. 10

A skylark mourns Quite a furlong away May be on the other bank Beyond the river Of the conjugal pleasure Flowing into the sea of voidness. Lovely poem shared. 10++ for it.

Beyond the river Of the conjugal pleasure Flowing into the sea of voidness. You can make such real pains tranmit into other's heart. Great skill. Thanks. 10++++++

Beyond the river Of the conjugal pleasure Flowing into the sea of voidness. Loved the order the river of voidness. Thanks for the nice poem. 10++

The death of my nascent dream Before its first cry. Beautiful poem. Nicely penned. 10+++