Sunday, October 8, 2017

Every Moon Sets -07: The Dark Blue Evening Comments

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And still

It was not all over,
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

As if you wanted to listen To the dying echoes Of my leafless urge Snaking through the Valley of my just widowed heart. Superb imagery. A great poem to read. 10+++ for it.

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Rajendra Rout 07 November 2017

Heaps of ashes On the bald foreheads Of the darkest hours- In the nuptial bed Of my crystal heart. Great poem sir.thanks for shairing....10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you dear Rajendra for your lovely remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you Rajendra for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Nosheen Irfan 12 October 2017

Superb imagery. A great poem to read. Enjoyed it a lot. A poem that gives poetic delight in abundance. A big 10.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

My heart felt thanks my revered Ma'am. Your inspiring words and kind remarks made my day today.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 09 October 2017

As if you wanted to listen To the dying echoes Of my leafless urge Snaking through the Valley of my just widowed heart. Great poem, great imageries. Loved it. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you Rini dear for the loving remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 09 October 2017

As if you wanted to listen /To the dying echoes/Of my leafless urge/Snaking through the / Valley of my just widowed heart. Great poem.10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you Sabita dear for the loving remarks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 08 October 2017

Heaps of ashes On the bald foreheads Of the darkest hours- In the nuptial bed Of my crystal heart. Great poem dear, thanks for it. 10+ for the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 October 2017

Thank you for the lovely remarks.

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