Sunday, October 8, 2017

Every Moon Sets -05: The Raining Jungle Comments

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Still you did not halt,

There at the gate
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Paresh Chakra 01 December 2018

it is a very nice poem. poem picture is very beautiful

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Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

Under the hectic skies Raining jungles of sad bubbles And lakes of saline hopes And sweet despair. Love you poet through your poems. 10++++++ for its sharing.

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Rajendra Rout 12 November 2017

Under the hectic skies Raining jungles of sad bubbles And lakes of saline hopes And sweet despair. Loved his stanza.beautiful expression....10+++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you dear Rajendra for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you Rajendra for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 05 November 2017

Under the hectic skies Raining jungles of sad bubbles And lakes of saline hopes And sweet despair. Nicely penned.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you dear Soumya for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you dear Soumya Ranjan for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Prativa Rani 04 November 2017

Under the hectic skies Raining jungles of sad bubbles And lakes of saline hopes And sweet despair. Love you through your poems. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you dear Rani for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you Rani for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 09 October 2017

Under the hectic skies Raining jungles of sad bubbles And lakes of saline hopes Love the way you wrote it, nice imagery, the raining jungle of sad bubbles. Thanks. 10+++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you dear Rini for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Sabita Sahoo 09 October 2017

The anger and evil In your looks were Spread over Vast acres of dark legends Beautiful expression. Thanks for sharing. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you dear Sabita for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you dear Sabita for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 08 October 2017

Under the hectic skies Raining jungles of sad bubbles And lakes of saline hopes And sweet despair. It is a beautiful poem sir. I loved this stanza.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 October 2017

Thanks Soumya for the remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 13 November 2017

Thank you dear for your lovely remarks and the words of inspiration.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 08 October 2017

Every time you are more lovable like your poems.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 October 2017

Thank you sir for your great heart and those loving remarks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 08 October 2017

Under the hectic skies Raining jungles of sad bubbles And lakes of saline hopes And sweet despair. Loved his stanza.nicely penned. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 October 2017

Thank you dear for the lovely remarks.

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