Sunday, October 8, 2017

Every Moon Sets -03: The Dark Smile Comments

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Your smile in the dark

Sad, evil, yet nostalgic
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Lopamudra Kajolika 15 November 2017

The tiny kid in dreams Within me, turned pale Pale with fear and shock Still half awake, half asleep On the bed of youth, Thanks for sharing it. Beautiful poem,

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Seema Sharma Rimi 09 October 2017

The tiny kid in dreams Within me, turned pale Pale with fear and shock Still half awake, half asleep On the bed of youth, Lines, rare and beautiful. Thanks. 10+++ for the poem shared.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you my dear Rini for the loving remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 09 October 2017

Your smile in the dark Sad, evil, yet nostalgic Hypnotized the buds- Beautiful poem shared. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Thank you dear Sabita for the loving remarks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 08 October 2017

The tiny kid in dreams Within me, turned pale Pale with fear and shock Still half awake, half asleep On the bed of youth, Beautiful poem, thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 October 2017

Thank you Neetu dear for the lovely remarks.

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