Every Moment I Live With You Comments

A lovely write of the emotions felt in each living momemt!

Keep writing. There is room for improvement

You should discard your thausarus. Your writing is like a carricature; an exaggeration, rather like an unskilled plastic surgeon' s work.

SO perfect and nice keep up writing great works

A wonderful poem.Write more.

I don't think, i have read a better poem beautiful!

un expressive? if that was un expressive than, my poetry is dead. Very romantic and concise makes me warm and tingly inside. I fell in love with the poet.

The end just sweet and the whole poem was all out, very detail and done in layers of beautiful texture, it was nice one, should to write more poem_Unwritten Soul

To impart that level of emotion - passion, desire, respect and perhaps a seemingly obsessional love? A gorgeous poem!

Her divine trance still enthralls my immortal soul..........Brilliant Lovely flow of thoughts! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! gr8 job! ! ! ! ! !

fantastic one! Effective vocabulary and free flow of thoughts

Very excellent writing. Love your diverse use of words

very nice i like the vocabulary used you should write more

Nice poem excelant way of expression good vocabulary used

the way of u penned is outstanding, bounded by the soft n heart touching words, come on plz upload some more.....

This is a beautiful poem. Very romantic, nice flow.

Profound though abstract. I suppose anyone in any state of commitment can relate to this poem deeply. Even when you're not with her in body, you live with her in heart and soul forever. Wonderful poem!

What a beautiful poem and sentiment - every moment I live with you. I love it!