If i could have your arms as a pillow, i would bring it everywhere, even on the bus. I would wrap it around me if i was cold. I would put half of it on my shoulders if i was at the cinema. I would put them behind me if i was looking at the sea, and make it squeeze around my
stomach until i felt you in my bellybutton.
I want to be a fish gliding through your veins, come out of your mouth and kiss every millimetre of your lips.
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This I-lay-my-heart-bare genre of poetry is absolutely moving, the fish of your yearnings actually moved all over the confusion of blood your desire of running fingers actually tickled my thinning scalp. Beautiful my child very universally lucid depiction of some very deep seated emotions. r
this isn't just a retaliatory comment in response to your nice words....i wouldn't comment you if i didn't like what i saw - this poem is honest and true, i have been in love and know this. there is some original language interspersed amongst the feeling...and it's good that you're not restricted by structure and format.well done.
a beautiful poem........ expresses how much love u have for him.. wonderfull
This is how I want to be loved... of course.