Every Line Comments

These lines are my sacred vow, that's why I have to get them out. musical and mystical....... still devoted to your pen aroha r

I'm with Fay! The turnaround in those two lines is brilliant! Tony

A favourite phrase for me is 'the hidden me is yours alone now' - - this committment is so honestly penned - - ah I shall remember that - - - a lovely piece in all.........10 from Fay.

Every line indeed, and yours convey so very much...I'm with Kevin Wells, 'who' is a lucky devil.