Friday, October 11, 2013

Every Flower Comments

Rating: 4.5

Every flower I see today is for you.
Every bird I hear singing is for you.
All bright, lovely colours.
Children walking with their mother.
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Susy Evelyne
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 30 June 2014

Wow! I like particularly the simple diction and candid expression of whispers of yours.

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Khairul Ahsan 06 May 2014

Today I read this sweet little poem of yours, and liked it so much! When one feels love for someone, one wants to dedicate everything beautiful one sees to his/her beloved one. A beautiful, sweet little poem that I liked so much!

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Heather Wilkins 13 December 2013

everything is for the one we love. a sweetly written poem

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John Brown 23 October 2013

A lovely little poem. I really enjoyed it. I like the simpler stuff, it doesn't tax my feeble brain too much.

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Susy Evelyne

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