Monday, January 23, 2006

Every Dream Is True Comments

Rating: 5.0

The midnight streets
Howl viciously
Like a wild cat
In the jungle vines
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Uriah Hamilton
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asma Jone 03 December 2008

awww....so romantic..this poem is my favorite from everything i have read so far.. I will kiss your Adorably gorgeous stomach With a sleeping child within ....that is so beautiful...

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Sallie Howson 04 February 2006

ohhh sweet love...a 10 from me

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Shannon Chapel 29 January 2006

Tender and lovely. You are a true gentleman, Uriah. Shannon

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Amberlee Carter 27 January 2006

la sigh...this is soft and tender...you have some wonderful, original images in it as well...in short, I enjoyed it my friend.

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Ivy Christou 26 January 2006

this made my eyes watery my friend.. simply beautiful and yes every dream is true if you believe in it :) HBH

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 25 January 2006

I hope you have found the one :) Very beautiful indeed!

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Lori Boulard 25 January 2006

Uriah, could this be true? Hast thou found true love? If not, you really have the reader going here. I love those first five lines.

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Linda Hepner 24 January 2006

I like the way the first and last verse round off your images.

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Ernestine Northover 24 January 2006

Top marks here Uriah, this is a beautiful write, so moving and lovely. You have excelled. Well done. Love Ernestine XXX

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Are congratulatory cigars in order here, Sir Hamilton?

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***** ********* 23 January 2006

Wow! Brilliant work Uriah. The title is perfectly true. 10 from smiling very deeply, Tai

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Mary Nagy 23 January 2006

This is beautiful Uriah......so many of my favorites are here.....lilacs, rain....I love the kissing the belly with the child within.....Just a great poem! Sincerely, Mary

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Angela Wright 23 January 2006

*goose bumps* oh my... this is just gorgeous. such light and hope and beauty. :)))

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