The midnight streets
Howl viciously
Like a wild cat
In the jungle vines
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Tender and lovely. You are a true gentleman, Uriah. Shannon
la sigh...this is soft and tender...you have some wonderful, original images in it as well...in short, I enjoyed it my friend.
this made my eyes watery my friend.. simply beautiful and yes every dream is true if you believe in it :) HBH
I hope you have found the one :) Very beautiful indeed!
Uriah, could this be true? Hast thou found true love? If not, you really have the reader going here. I love those first five lines.
I like the way the first and last verse round off your images.
Top marks here Uriah, this is a beautiful write, so moving and lovely. You have excelled. Well done. Love Ernestine XXX
Are congratulatory cigars in order here, Sir Hamilton?
Wow! Brilliant work Uriah. The title is perfectly true. 10 from smiling very deeply, Tai
This is beautiful Uriah......so many of my favorites are here.....lilacs, rain....I love the kissing the belly with the child within.....Just a great poem! Sincerely, Mary
*goose bumps* oh my... this is just gorgeous. such light and hope and beauty. :)))
awww....so romantic..this poem is my favorite from everything i have read so far.. I will kiss your Adorably gorgeous stomach With a sleeping child within ....that is so beautiful...