Wednesday, September 14, 2005

Every Day Comments

Rating: 4.1

Every day i wake up.
Every day i live my life.
Every day i see you,
But your heart pulsates with a beat true to someone else.
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Vanessa Brown
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Steve Armstrong 29 November 2005

Hi Ness, Ignore the t**ts at school, you've got a real talent! A 10 from me!

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Ivy Christou 07 November 2005

Well what can I say.. Most of people will experience the same thing, until they find some one that everyday they wake up is next to them, loving them like the other one never could. Take care HBH

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Matthew Rounds 20 September 2005

From the heart, Ness - I like it. I'm curious as to who you were thinking of when you wrote it - anyone i know? P.S. There's such a thing as too much depression :)

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Sallie Howson 14 September 2005

welcome to the site..i enjoyed your poem..keep posting

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