Saturday, October 29, 2016

Every Day Dreams Comments

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I sometimes sit and think
Would I want to live forever?
I wonder if I could
Would life get any better?
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Ray Hansell
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Susan Williams 29 October 2016

Such gentle musings- -you make me feel like I am inside your mind thinking your thoughts and remembering your memories. That's putting the reader smack dab in the middle of your poem! Good write!

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