Saturday, January 31, 2009

Every Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

it's morning, the room is already full of sunlight
outside birds sing in harmony
people cross the streets in hurry
and I'm still in bed
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Sabrina ,
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Lynn Glover 06 July 2010

I really enjoyed reading this poem, Sabrina. Your are very courageous and strong. Much happiness is what I pray for you. Lynn

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Dr.subhendu Kar 09 November 2009

know it hurts but I cannot feel the fall I have to take it by hand and put in place...........eloquently poignant,10++, thanks for sharing

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Marcella D 01 August 2009

wow this is very good inspiring poem, nice Sabrina

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Poetic Soul 08 July 2009

Full of emotions expressed in this poem, keep at it.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 June 2009

pain expressed beautifully! 10+

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

'I'm awake for a few minutes now but I didn't stand up yet my legs won't help me do what depends on them they are dormant in a deep coma state' Wonderful 10

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Naidz Ladia 24 April 2009

sweetheart, , , i could feel your pain...if i could only share my feet just to ease your thoughts, , if you could only share your burden, i promise i would...dear, dont forget, time heals all wounds...dont try to feel sorry for this situations, , you are a nice person, and your heart is pure..i love you dear..i love you so much.. naizz

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

u are truly resilient and strong.. the poem clearly asserts it.. do not dwell in self pity keep ur head up high.. ur beautiful and amazing God bless u

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Sameer Ahmed 31 January 2009

Very astonishingly you have described your effort at the start of every new day..............it shows a good sign of hope and eagerness of still wanting to live life with passion despite of the tragedy............10/10

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