Sunday, June 13, 2010

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somehow these clouds
seem to come in my way
they neither rain nor float away
they always clutch at my eyes
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indira babbellapati
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 26 June 2010

a nicely worded poem on pining.10 marks. shan

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 June 2010

‘ever since had you left’…alters psychic parenchyma in myriad ways…and you’ve worded it in magnificent metaphor…thanks…Ma’am Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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