Everlasting Things Are Incomplete! Comments

Dreams of fallen stars Still open their eyes… But in my memory! Everlasting things Are to be left incomplete! I hope someday the things get complete and be everlasting as your efforts.10/10 again.

Very romantic.........good imagery. well written

aye well written. Got me back to my school days.

Poem holds much emotion under the surface

good write...the concluding line speaks volume of the emotions inside...inside mind...inside this write... good piecce, Abhilash...thanks...10