Saturday, July 26, 2008

Everlasting Pain Comments

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The everlasting pain
I have held inside but I’ll never explain
Why by the knife I have lain
And I walk in the silent rain
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Darkangel Flyfree 07 November 2011

So sad........... I cried many times............ Never to die in one piece again......... A poem by Allison f. future writer.............

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Adam Thorn 07 November 2011

WOW! ! ! ! This poem is the bomb it's so cool! ! ! ! ! (PLus it made me cry: -) ! ! ! !) READ IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (OVER AND OVER AGAIN AND YOU'LL GET GOOSE-BUMPS! ! ! ! ! !)

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Ryad Omecti 27 July 2008

I don't think a poems ever made me cry before.. This is one of my favorites now. <3

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C T Heart 26 July 2008

Oh! my........it is so sad. You have put your feelings so right. Made me cried while reading it...so much pain. Squeezed my heart... Wishing you a sweet and happy life someday........ Heart

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