Everlasting Lesson Comments

the life is, and will be the open school for everyone.the people are its both teachers and students.but who is the real teacher? maybe the life itself! ! ... or the god? ! ! ... yeah thts right. obstacles, compassion, sadnesses, but a little bit happinesses too. this work is really great.with a brilliant idea. best wishes~nb

Speedy very speedy. I always had a curiosity in my mind what is next. Very Nice. Very good work. The last 5 lines concluded well. Keep it up

Good poem. I like it. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.