Everlasting Depths Of Darkness Comments

It's a dystopic poem. 'Cries unheard, secret buried deep Tears flow, Savannah creek. Hurting pain, scared beneath. Deeper and deeper. Everlasting Deep' Very depressing. 'Eventually everything will become overbearing and it will become a classical condition and everlasting.' (Note) Dismal thoughts.

It sounds something like dystopia but I liked it

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