Saturday, March 8, 2014

Everlastig Memory Comments

Rating: 3.4

A subtle glance in a secret smile
And few whispered words of heart,
Immortalised in frozen time;
Still, ages are since we two parted...
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Valsa George 07 March 2019

I need the dream to stay alive, Preserved in everlasting memory, For you were my life... My only love...for eternity... These concluding quatrain proclaims the intensity of your love and your desire to live in the memory of that love as long as there is breath in you! Perhaps heaven is one where you will be united with your loved one all through eternity! Love never days! Great write!

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Jeremy Horsford 10 May 2015

We never know what we've lost until it's gone.

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Roseann Shawiak 09 March 2014

People being unkind to us sometimes taints the memories of our dreams that we would prefer to keep alive. It's like they can't trust their own feelings and look to distance themselves from us. Yet, we continue to remember them with eternal love in our dreams. Great poem! RoseAnn

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