Monday, September 17, 2018

Evergreen - 2 Comments

Rating: 4.7

An evergreen tree
Stands out amid fall foliage
A lovely contrast.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 07 March 2025

eh, That was supposed to be, , , the way your words painted this scene.....

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Rebecca Navarre 07 March 2025

Ever so majestic! .. With such an inspirational feel! .. That is ever so beautiful! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 07 March 2025

I've always loved ever green trees! .. And the way words you've have painted this scene, it too stands out Oh so beautifully in heart and mind! ..

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Anjandev Roy 30 September 2024

Marvelous piece...... thanks for sharing.....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 September 2024

Wonderful Thanks for sharing Rose-Marie

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Rob Lamberton 29 September 2024

Some stand while others fall!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 February 2020

2) It is a greatest art to create beauty, and I assure you you have that ability, dear Mrs. Juan Austin, since you have a beautiful mind. I have said to you once, I reckon. I love this statement a very lot. Thank you for sharing this Beauty. A true enjioyment to read this. Sent with love and care, Sylvia

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 February 2020

1) Truly imaginable is this beautiful phrase, and since I am a paintres too, I " see more" in the scene you drafted, this green colour outlives all to grey growing leaves, while reading these lines once again, I see them so very visible in your garden.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 July 2019

A magnificent three liner on nature and natural beauty! Loved revisiting it!

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Bipasha D 08 May 2019

A beautiful imagery. I can visualize it...the fall colors and the evergreen looks simply gorgeous.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 April 2019

Evergreen and Evergreen 2 both are amazing poems by the amazing poetess.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 22 March 2019

a beautiful imagery! evergreen oxymoron and evergreen poem! please give your precious and critical view about my poem 'Resurruction of Donne.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2018

An evergreen tree Stands out amid fall foliage A lovely contrast.........haunting expression. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 September 2018

Foliage! ! ! With the romance of nature! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Crayon Poet 24 September 2018

The red, copper, and yellow trees surrounding the lone evergreen accentuate its autumn beauty; the evergreen returns the kind favor. A hushed tone of visual serenity, I enjoyed reading.

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Mr.Mister 21 September 2018

Lovely picture. Nicely written.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2018

In the middle of the falling leaves green tree is so contrast. Nice imaginary.10

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Akhtar Jawad 18 September 2018

nature is full of contrasts and these contrasts are beauty. A wonderful poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 September 2018

Hi Rose Marie, Lovely one, this! Fall/ autumn is a sad season, with the entire nature shedding its green brightness. And all around you, sans colours. nature -“ le belle sans merci”. In such a situation, it is so heartening to find one tree with her green sheen still on.. So beautifully written... loved it

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 September 2018

Such a wonderful haiku, ate Rose............10++++++++++++++++

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