Friday, March 25, 2016

Everglades Comments

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Glide through the everglades with me
Slip between the cypress trees
Sit silently and listen
To the song of the frogs
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Mike Smith 26 March 2016

An absolutely beautiful poem. The shift from simply describing an environment to trying in earnest to become it was done masterfully. Great write. A 10 undoubtedly

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Suzanne Hayasaki 26 March 2016

Thank you for your kind comments.

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James Mclain 25 March 2016

Your form still is flawless.. James

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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