Friday, October 31, 2008

....Everchanging Time.... Comments

Rating: 3.2

the arm holes stare
like dumb gaping wounds
at the passersby
the single eye painted
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wardha jawdat
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Aijaz Asif 06 November 2008

what a deep write indeed and yes the cruelity of time is eating away the youth but it's also giving away good experiences this is what a life is...i liked it very beautiful write 10+++

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Wali Jamali 05 November 2008

out of the world..................

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 November 2008

Great philosophy. Like IRREVERSIBLES by 'msl.Anuradha'. So true we all have to realize. It also reminds me a Hindi song: 'darpan thumhe jub darane lage......thab tum mere paas aana priye' fro Poorub aur Paschim. Great poem..........10

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 04 November 2008

wow...well written...

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 November 2008

Aging is a timeless experience, , , as we age we know what the reality of life is but we tend to remain silent, , , well spoken here wardha, , , a 10

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Kesav Easwaran 01 November 2008

decaying is also a process in life...the beauty lies in its silent understanding acceptance...but i agree with you Wardha...for at this age of yours it sure looks a horrible thought...but as one ages on, the intensity of this horror recedes...ten for this thoughtful write...

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on the outer rims of pink a grey awaits in glory where supple curves yielded sits pretty; recounting sagas of yore the undulating forehead where love leaves arenas reverence rushes in

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