Monday, September 10, 2012

Ever Shall Comments

Rating: 4.7

Ever shall my heart adore you
`Cross the boundaries of time
Always will my love endureth
Over mountains yet to climb
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Valerie Dohren
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Walterrean Salley 18 November 2012

… Of pure love and dedication. What more can one ask for? it's the ultimate; Very consoling.Val.

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Ruby Honeytip 01 October 2012

You make me want to be a better poet. Thank you for sharing your art with us x

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Sina Farajzadeh 23 September 2012

Good and deep and I like your old styled words that you used in this poem. Good luck

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Jerry Hughes 16 September 2012

................................Excellent, need I say more? Regards, Jerry

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Hans Vr 15 September 2012

Eternal love transcending the finite. Heart warming I believe together with you, Valerie. Love is stronger than our body. We came from this wonderful source of love We can connect to it during our lives We will return to this wonderful source. We are just part of it all the time.

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Danny Draper 12 September 2012

Lyrical and enduring sentiment of love and care.

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Dave Walker 11 September 2012

A very beautiful and fantastic poem.

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Neela Nath Das 11 September 2012

Love to you a heavenly feeling. Your poem teaches us purity. Love all your work.

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Valsa George 11 September 2012

As the Muse once deserted, came back to you at your calling, Joy has also revisited you when you beckoned her; and that too with a promise never to desert you any more! ! Oh! What magic!

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Heather Wilson 10 September 2012

A fantastic poem Val, the last verse was so beautiful, I read it over and over, so sad but wonderful.

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Joseph Anderson 10 September 2012

Delicately beautiful, a genuine epic poem of love and dedication.10 is not enough

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How fantastic Valerie? I too feel like being one of the guarded dear ones of yours. A promise and a hug of true love and care you show here. Well written and will be read by many over here.

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Valerie Dohren

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