Ever shall my heart adore you
`Cross the boundaries of time
Always will my love endureth
Over mountains yet to climb
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You make me want to be a better poet. Thank you for sharing your art with us x
Good and deep and I like your old styled words that you used in this poem. Good luck
................................Excellent, need I say more? Regards, Jerry
Eternal love transcending the finite. Heart warming I believe together with you, Valerie. Love is stronger than our body. We came from this wonderful source of love We can connect to it during our lives We will return to this wonderful source. We are just part of it all the time.
Love to you a heavenly feeling. Your poem teaches us purity. Love all your work.
As the Muse once deserted, came back to you at your calling, Joy has also revisited you when you beckoned her; and that too with a promise never to desert you any more! ! Oh! What magic!
A fantastic poem Val, the last verse was so beautiful, I read it over and over, so sad but wonderful.
Delicately beautiful, a genuine epic poem of love and dedication.10 is not enough
How fantastic Valerie? I too feel like being one of the guarded dear ones of yours. A promise and a hug of true love and care you show here. Well written and will be read by many over here.
… Of pure love and dedication. What more can one ask for? it's the ultimate; Very consoling.Val.