Ever shall it be
When the sky cries rain
Friends come with gentleness
To wipe away the pain
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An awesome poem that reaches across as a prayer, beautiful Love duncan X
This is a really good write. I like the rythm of it. It leads you on in a nice steady beat. Your imagery is great too; 'When the sky cries rain' Ever shall it be indeed.
Firstly I thank you for commenting on my poems, i could not send you a message, i guess you've disabled the feature. This is a lovely poem, postivie and so true, frineds can do so much for you. btw i love the title too. Preets
Love that title and the poem does it justice. Adeline