Monday, November 1, 2010

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Rating: 5.0

Something sought through steaming alley
Caught in swirling mist, the soft finale
Turning, churning down the valley
Valley of my heart
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Beach Leanbh
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Christopher Thor Britt 28 November 2010

I truly like everything about this poem; the meter, verbiage, structure and the message. I enjoy the challenge of interpretation while I engage a poem...you write as an artist paints, not as a novice with 'paint by numbers'

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