Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Eventide Waveplay. Comments

Rating: ★5.0

On empty beach, and listening,
I imagined wavelets playing.
Piggy-backing quietly,
Well-behaved but shouldering,
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Fay Slimm
beach
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Bob Gibson 26 September 2008

Beautiful Fay! you have captured the essence of a receding tide i can imagine in my mind those showering sparkles, regards Bob

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Kevin Eaglesfield 26 September 2008

Hi Fay.Really want to go for a paddle.Captures the essence of something commonplace and makes it magical.Kev

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Ian Bowen 23 September 2008

Fay, great atmospheric piece. Liked the use of 'perculating' and the line 'Sending crabs adash to homes'. Most enjoyable piece of work.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Tom Balch 23 September 2008

When I read this its like being on the beach,10 from Tom

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
Fay Slimm
Fay Slimm
in Cornwall U.K.
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