Monday, July 10, 2017

Evensong: Grafton Heights Comments

Rating: 5.0

fireflies moving like finely shattered starlight


against the sky-shaped gown of evening;
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GORDON GILHULY
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Captain Cur 11 July 2017

Intense, imaginative and passionate and that crescendo finish. Very nice!

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Gordon Gilhuly 12 July 2017

Thanks, Captain - much appreciated!

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Richard Wlodarski 11 July 2017

Gordon, I love this love poem. The imagery is so vivid. And each, and every sing line...perfect! ! !

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Gordon Gilhuly 11 July 2017

Thanks, once again, Richard.

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