Monday, May 22, 2017

Evensong: Blue Comments

Rating: 4.5

evensong: blue


blue shadows climb the rounded slopes of the hills
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GORDON GILHULY
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Richard Wlodarski 14 November 2017

Now, that's a love poem! ! !

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Gordon Gilhuly 14 November 2017

Thanks, Richard. Good to hear from you again. Do you want to go ahead & post our masterpiece on your page?

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Richard Wlodarski 15 November 2017

It would be an honour, Gordon!

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 May 2017

the shape of a lover's thighs fingers are a poem the high note on a violin shooting stars, pleasure, like the flame of the last match All these very fine lines, i collected from your poem after carefully reading your poem. just loved reading it. you are original and so much passion you have in your words... thank you dear poet. tony

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Gordon Gilhuly 14 November 2017

Thanks Tony. Your comments are much appreciated.

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 May 2017

A nice lovely start. Thanks

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 May 2017

Thank you!

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Akhtar Jawad 22 May 2017

I am become the bearer of words that ring like gongs that tumble like flutes made of human bones I hold hope between my palms like the flame of the last match lovely lines of a beautiful poem.

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Gordon Gilhuly 25 May 2017

Thank you.

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