Saturday, May 27, 2017

Evensong Comments

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fireflies moving like finely broken starlight
against the sky-shaped gown of evening
the wind quiets its lascivious moans in the ears of the leaves
whispers sweet nothings to the emptiness
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Akhtar Jawad 19 October 2017

The evening song is sweet, the message of nature, what else it may be other than love, is nicely relayed in this lovely poem.

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Gordon Gilhuly 19 October 2017

Thank you, Akhtar. Much appreciated.

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