Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Evening Time Comments

Rating: 4.5

The evening sun hid itself among the dusty clouds
as it surrendered to the gloom of the crimson sky.
The birds tweeted their melodious chorus as trees danced by
to the whistle of gusty chilled wind.
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Godfrey Morris
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Vincent Kuo 27 May 2012

What a lovely imagine you've depicted, after the stresses of each day, to just sit back and simply behold mother natures beauty.

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Rajendran Muthiah 09 May 2012

Beautiful description of the sounds and sights happen at sunset. A calm atmosphere prevails in the poem. You are a poet gifted with wonderful diction to carve out your poem. Mellifluous lines! Rated*****

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Sharad Juneja 08 May 2012

it'a again a nice composition

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Godfrey Morris

Godfrey Morris

Kingston, Jamaica
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