Wednesday, December 22, 2004
Evening Swim Comments
Rating: ★4.2
And there we were, in darkness, down by the river.
Four girls, four boys. A night away from town.
A cooling breeze was causing her to shiver,
or was the prospect of the lovely evening gown,
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Sandra Osborne
22 December 2004
Good. Excellent ending as always, but the flow is labored. Don't force it, work it.
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8/19/2025 9:58:27 PM # 1.0.0
Herbert you made me wish i was there, with all those girls and there white flesh but with my luck i would have finished up with the hairy 'YOWIE' Wait wrong poem, you also need a lot of rum to see them i enjoy your little titilating, did i spell that write poems you have a gift with word power my friend even though i'v had a couple of reds my interest never waned Warm regards allan