Friday, January 1, 2010

Evening Spread. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Settling mysterious into the late afternoon,
Phoebus hazily parts early twilight's face
And pushes herself roundly between clouds,
Beats the moon with mellow light and outpaces
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Fay Slimm
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Lynda Robson 15 January 2010

What a wonderful picture you paint here Fay, it gives one the sense of well being, uplifting to read on a cold winter's day, 10 Lynda xx

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fine evening.. superbly written by lady fay. loved itl.

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Meggie Gultiano 02 January 2010

this is a masterpiece, Fay..Glad that I was able to read this.Thank you for sharing this with us.I love best these lines of yours... The glory of evening installed, now inspired we Leave the scene and set off to fireside and tea.

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Alison Cassidy 01 January 2010

This is rather lovely, Faye and written with skill and style. Love your use of enjambment too - masterly. And the images that you pen (in water colors methinks, not heavy oils) glisten with poetic truth. There is a pleasing mix of the personal and the profound in your work. Congratulations on a fine poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Fay Slimm

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